In Which I Happy-Dance And Run Joyously Screaming Through the House

So, some exciting stuff happening on my first novel (Primal Instinct) front. As I posted a couple of weeks ago (here), I finished both my copy edits and my AAs (Author Alterations).

After talking with a few established author friends, and reading what others had posted elsewhere, I realized how blessed I was that my copy edits were pretty basic, and all ones I agreed with. (Or, since we’re talking about copy edits, I should say: all ones with which I agreed.)

Yes, there were a lot of corrections in my copy edits, but none of them changed the feel or flavor of my writing. Nor were any of the changes particularly nit-picky, imo. Evidently, nit-pickiness does happen and I’ve heard horror stories of manuscripts returned with dozens of requested changes per page.

Some edit marks you may not be familiar with

That sort of overhaul is frustrating for a writer, because often you’ve labored meticulously over the flow of specific pages, paragraphs, sentences and even individual words. Then a copy editor – who only works with the book once, and never has to see it again – can come in and rip it to shreds. Then you have to decide as an author what to change, what to fight to keep, and what to cry about losing. It can be hugely frustrating, I’m sure. Fortunately, my set of copy edits wasn’t like that at all.

My AAs I had a month to complete. This was the last chance for me to look at the book. I had a trusted friend read it and she found half a dozen spelling errors – those tricky ones where the misspelled word spelled another word correctly, so they’re easy to miss. I also made some changes to a few sentences that made me cringe, and then sent it back to my editor, weeks earlier than my deadline.  And now it’s completely out of my hands.

Last week I was asked for two more important pieces of the book: the “cast of characters” that goes at the beginning of every Intrigue novel and my book dedication. Both of those were special to write.

But yesterday the bestest, most surreal thing happened. I was talking to some Intrigue friends about the February covers that were just released and could only be found by doing an advanced search on Amazon. So I looked through those, and then OF COURSE I did an advance Amazon search of the April 2014 Harlequin Intrigue releases, and low and behold:

THAT’S MY BOOK!!! No cover yet, of course, but THAT’S MY BOOK!!! (And it’s available for pre-order. That’s just ridiculously awesome.)

And if you click on the author link: THAT’S ME!!

I have to admit, my heart went a pitter-pat. I got up and happy-danced around my living room and ran screaming through the house (clutching my laptop). It was an amazing feeling.  I’m trying to relish these moments, because I know they’ll come only once. If you rush through them and don’t take the chance to enjoy them, they’re gone forever.  Parenting taught me that. And how to happy-dance.

So there you have it, my thrilling news for the week. I resisted the urge to pre-order a copy of my own book, but you all feel free to purchase all you want. :)

The Road to Publication - Copy Edits & Author Alterations (aka: Proof that I'm Not as Smart as I Think I Am)

So this week brought another first in the journey to become a published author for Harlequin Intrigue. Each of these milestones have been exciting and terrifying at the same time. And because each is so new to me, it's stressful. Way stressful.

One First that wasn't stressful - My first Advance check!

My editor sends me something -- a file, a question, a form to fill out -- and I do it. But then I wonder: are my comments understandable? are they appropriate? are they even wanted in some cases?

And, you know me, I always have a comment. About everything. I'm sure there has been times when my editor wished she had never signed me.

Regardless, I'm trying to treasure and appreciate every step as it comes because I know I will never have another first book. It's kind of like parenting: you love all your kids, but everything is unique, new, terrifying and unexpected with the first one.

This week, I received my first ever set of Copy Edits.  Basically, a copy editor and my main editor had gone through and marked up my manuscript -- everything from formatting to grammar/spelling, to overall consistency issues, to just better ways of writing a particular sentence. It was pretty brutal -- like being back in college. If their comments had just been in red ink, it would've bled just like a Freshman English paper all over again.

Here's a sample:

My Copy Edits

This is a reasonably mild page in term of comments, some had many more. Of my 220-page book, there were only about 10 pages that didn't have some sort of correction.

Anything that was undeniably wrong -- the blue words in the text itself above -- was just automatically changed for me, I had no say in that. But anything that required an opinion, something that could go either way, I had to approve. That's where the blue and red boxes came in. For the record, I agreed with probably 95% of their suggested changes.

So after the initial shock and embarrassment of "OMG, how did I miss so many errors?" wore off, and the perfectionist in me who doesn't like any red marks on her paper, was stuffed and gagged, it really wasn't too bad. I made what changes I needed to and I was able to get it back to my editor within a couple of days.

My Author Alteration file

And, to my surprise, a couple hours later my editor sent my Author Alteration (AA) proofs. This is basically my last chance to make any changes and catch any errors within my book. Once I send that file back (due mid-October), I am stating that, as far as I'm concerned, the book is officially and completely finished and error-free. It will then go to a second copy editor one last time for anything me, my editor, the first copy editor (and then me again) might all have missed.


And darn if that doesn't look just like a book. Like a real, live book. That people will hopefully buy and read come April 2014.

So here's my "Road to Publication" Timeline so far:

May 2012 - Sent a back cover blurb & 100-word snippet to Intrigue team as part of a contest; Editor requested first three chapters and full synopsis

June 2012 - Sent requested chapters and synopsis

October 2012 - Received (amidst the 2012 "So You Think You Can Write" Contest Madness - I'm still embarrassed to think about it) request for full manuscript from editor (read about that request here)

December 2012 - Sent full manuscript to editor

June 18, 2013 - Received "The Call" from Harlequin -- they wanted to buy and publish my book in April 2014

Mid-July 2013 - Asked to submit the "Art Fact Sheet" for my manuscript.  A list of a billion questions (about characters, locales, seasons, etc.) from which they will develop the cover of my book. So if my hero looks like Fabio, I only have myself to blame.

August 1, 2013 - After much discussion back and forth, I was notified that the title of my Harlequin Intrigue book would be Primal Instinct (read about that here)

Sept 10, 2013 - Received copy edits; made changes and returned on 9/12/13

Sept 12, 2013 - Received AA (author alteration) file; due mid-October.

There's other stuff I know I still have to do before next April when the book comes out, and I'm looking forward to that too. It's all a little bit scary, but a whole lot of awesome.